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Dillon Cavanagh Peer Review

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After reading your article, i felt very informed about the topic. The content was neutral and related to the subject. The only recommendation i have would be to add a few more citations so that the information is backed up and can be verified. But all in all very good draft.

Peer Review by Mackenzie G

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Hi Laura, Wonderful job you are doing on this article. I honestly had never heard of The Great Pacific Garbage Patch and what you have written in your draft is very informative. You have kept a very unbiased opinion. I believe I see resources for citations in your bibliography section of your sandbox. I'm assuming that those are for your addition to the article. If they aren't then I would recommend at least one citation per paragraph. Great job again. Mackenzzzie (talk) 05:00, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]