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I made you a peer review

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Nice article! I made you a peer review here = https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ALaura.griffin24%2FPleistoannelida%2FRehema.karanja_Peer_Review&wvprov=sticky-header

Rehema.karanja (talk) 20:17, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction:
- Minor tweaks to adding correct punctuation. Needs to be a comma between "Furthermore, there". "There" in that sentence also needs to be lowercase.
Content:
- Content added addresses relevant content towards article on "Pleistoannelida".
- Content not wordy or overly detailed. Just fix minor punctuation errors.
Tone and Balance:
- The content is neutral. Didn't find any claims that were heavily biased.
Sources:
- Credible sources.
- Links works.
- Need to fix any missing information for citing sources. (ex. check date values, which you seem to already be aware of because it says (help))
Organization:
- Everything flows well.
- Well organized.
- Sections were broken down well and reflect the major points of the topic.
Images:
- Missing images. (2)
- Love the picture of the Anterior end of the Magelona.
Bibliography:
- Everything checks out. Credible sources and well described summary on citations.
Good job!
Mlopata72 (talk) 20:22, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]