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I made you a peer review
[edit]Nice article! I made you a peer review here = https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ALaura.griffin24%2FPleistoannelida%2FRehema.karanja_Peer_Review&wvprov=sticky-header
Rehema.karanja (talk) 20:17, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- Introduction:
- - Minor tweaks to adding correct punctuation. Needs to be a comma between "Furthermore, there". "There" in that sentence also needs to be lowercase.
- Content:
- - Content added addresses relevant content towards article on "Pleistoannelida".
- - Content not wordy or overly detailed. Just fix minor punctuation errors.
- Tone and Balance:
- - The content is neutral. Didn't find any claims that were heavily biased.
- Sources:
- - Credible sources.
- - Links works.
- - Need to fix any missing information for citing sources. (ex. check date values, which you seem to already be aware of because it says (help))
- Organization:
- - Everything flows well.
- - Well organized.
- - Sections were broken down well and reflect the major points of the topic.
- Images:
- - Missing images. (2)
- - Love the picture of the Anterior end of the Magelona.
- Bibliography:
- - Everything checks out. Credible sources and well described summary on citations.
- Good job!
- Mlopata72 (talk) 20:22, 8 November 2023 (UTC)