User talk:Kwhite15

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Hi, Kwhite15! Welcome to Wikipedia! Oscarortiz1 (talk) 17:04, 16 October 2015 (UTC)167.96.48.127 (talk) 17:00, 16 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Copyediting

I copy edited the article titled maternal bond. I added four commas.Kwhite15 (talk) 17:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry to say that those commas didn't improve the writing. I recommend that you revert the change. Instead, you should delete the weasel word "carefully" from the phrase "a carefully controlled study." Josef Horáček (talk) 17:12, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]