User talk:Krami045/sandbox

Overall good information. However, I would recommend sourcing similar to Chicago. It will be easier to add your sources to the references page, you can look at the source training to help you with your citation and adding to the references section. I'm assuming your information is more related to the culture of using bongs and so creating a subheading may work best in your case when officially adding your information to the Wiki page.

Additionally, some of the verbiage gets confusing. For instance, in the sentence "These types of bongs used..." in the second paragraph could possibly be rephrased. Review work once more to make sure your points get across clearly.

Mmwilb (talk) 20:48, 24 May 2019 (UTC) Mmwilb