User talk:Kputman2
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:51, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Score followed by comments: Intro/Lead: 1.5 points, You guys are missing fertilization and cleavage in the introduction, add it before talking about gastrulation in the introduction Content: 12 points, Consider adding in the gene expression patterns in the Gastrulation and Neurulation section, there is a lot of genes involved in the cell movement patterns. There is no Fertilization section in the paper, and citations are missing in the Cleavage section. Style: 1 point, Make sure that you guys rearrange your article, so that it flows logically, you also need to add a TITLE and HEADINGS for each section. Citations: 4 points, 19 citations correctly formatted, be sure to group all of your citations together at the end of the document.
Total points: 18.5/30 Overall not a bad start, just need to organize the document and add in the missing sections — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amohamed7 (talk • contribs) 15:42, 28 March 2018 (UTC)