User talk:Koopnasty
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Spelling/Grammar: Nearly Meets Standards
[edit]- Mostly good, there are some run on sentences like the second to last sentence in integration. Over is capitalized incorrectly in the first paragraph. Just give each paragraph a once-over to make sure
Language: Meets Standards
[edit]- Seems good overall. Might want to tighten up professionalism on the first sentence of political response (receive hate).
Organization: Meets Standards
[edit]- The piece is well-organized. Remove spaces before and after history heading.
Coding: Nearly Meets Standards
[edit]- Need to put a Section Header for the Reference part
Validity: Exceeds Standards
[edit]- Everything seems valid
Completion: Meets Standards
[edit]- I can't think of anything to add
Relevance: Exceeds Standards
[edit]- All parts seem relevant to the topic.
Sources: Nearly Meets Standards
[edit]- The sources you have are good and what you'd expect, you're just short 4.
Citations: Meets Standards
[edit]- Don't see a problem here
References: Meets Standards
[edit]- Reference section is good.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:29, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
12/6/18 Evaluation by Forrest C. Bevington
[edit]Spelling/Grammar: Nearly Meets Standards
[edit]- The first paragraph has good information, but there seems to be quite a few run on sentences with multiple grammar mistakes.
Language: Meets Standards
[edit]- The language in your piece is good, but I think you could word your sentences better to create a better flow throughout your edit.
Organization: Meets Standards
[edit]- Excellent organization, the only thing I would change is the placement of the "Status Of Urkrainians in Poland" and "Documents for Foreigners" like try to center those two to look better in terms of presentation.
Coding: Exceeds Standards
[edit]- I don't see any issues with your code.
Validity: Exceeds Standards
[edit]- Your information seems to be very valid with great information.
Completion: Exceeds Standards
[edit]- Your piece is well written with great information. Not sure I see anything else that needs to be added.
Relevance: Meets Standards
[edit]- Information is relevant to the topic of choice.
Sources: Nearly Meets Standards
[edit]- You only have 16 so you need four more sources, but other than that sources look good.
Citations: Meets Standards
[edit]- Great citations throughout your piece, but as mentioned above, you need 4 more sources.
References: Meets Standards
[edit]- The references look good throughout your piece, but you could add a few more to create more professionalism.