User talk:Kninss
Ways to improve ISIL in Bangladesh
[edit]Thanks for creating ISIL in Bangladesh.
A New Page Patroller Rosguill just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:
As written, the article doesn't consistently differentiate between activities specifically sponsored by ISIL and activities associated with other Islamic fundamentalist groups. Consider either narrowing the article's scope to exclusively be about ISIL, or move the page to "Islamic fundamentalism in Bangladesh" and cover the topic more broadly. Either way, be sure to stick to what is written in reliable sources without extrapolating, which can be a form of original research (see also WP:SYNTH)
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signed, Rosguill talk 23:55, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Rosguill: Thank you so much for getting back to me with constructive feedback. Upon review I can see what you mean in saying the article does not differentiate enough, so I will narrow it's scope to remain on topic. In regards to potential original research, I've tried to be very careful in this area, so I am not 100% which aspects of the article you are referring to, if any in particular. The sources I've used are mostly government websites/reports, academic articles or corroborated news stories, but perhaps it's my tone when writing that is the issue?
- I'll edit the article and shorten the lead section as per your suggestions, as well. Again, thank you so much for the guidance!