User talk:Kllamanzares/Comstock Saloon
Drafting
[edit]Your sourcing looks pretty good. Next step, planning - - how will you organize your article? (I'm going to ask you to work with Rosa - - as she is focusing on an article/topic similar to yours. Remind me in class.) ~~~ ProfHanley (talk) 16:52, 9 October 2023 (UTC)
Draft
[edit]The draft is shaping up. You might want to link to the existing Wikipedia page so that your peer editors can gauge your work. Keep going! ProfHanley (talk) 17:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
Draft II
[edit]This draft is looking good. Before sprucing up - - with images and/or more links - - do some line editing to make the prose a bit smoother. I've bolded some areas I think you need to review. ProfHanley (talk) 17:53, 6 November 2023 (UTC)