User talk:Kknigh27/draft
Review by Tyra Saxton
[edit]Your references are not bad but I would like to see some articles from JSTOR. There are tons that argue the reliability of Wikipedia. Also, I suggest adding more of your opinion and what you have learned from the articles you read. In most of your paper, the majority of the paragraph might be a quote. Take your time to decipher that quote and explain why it validates your argument. Overall, great start!