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Your submission at Articles for creation: Iyad Rimawi (December 19)

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HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:25, 19 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Iyad Rimawi

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Iyad Rimawi requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://soundcloud.com/iyadrimawiofficial. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Ways to improve Iyad Rimawi

Hello, KindaHamwi1,

Thank you for creating Iyad Rimawi.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

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Boleyn (talk) 08:46, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Iyad Rimawi moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Iyad Rimawi, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Boleyn (talk) 08:49, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Boleyn:

Hi Boleyn,

You moved Iyad Rimawi's page to draft and pointed a bunch of issues that are not clear to me. I don't get it!

Quoted from your input on Iyad's page: This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. (January 2020) Appreciate reviewing the page, yet struggling to understand why all the complications happening on the page. What do you mean that the source remain unclear? This is an artist page and I am the one who created it. I'm working with Iyad, I thought I picked the option in Wikipedia when I set up the page where it says says, the topic is closed to me! I carried Iyad's life in text accurately and the artist is informed with the content. Please get in touch if you need a proof of that. Also, there are multiple references in hand but all in Arabic language, can I add citation in another language to an English page?

Have a look at WP:INLINECITE to see examples of how references are meant to be cited, especially for biographies of living people. Most other pages have this, a random example so you can see how they are formatted is Victoria Ekanoye. This means we can clearly see (and verify) where each piece of information came from. Non-English sources are welcome in articles. Boleyn (talk) 11:42, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This biographical article is written like a résumé. Where do you see that? Can you be more specific so I can change the text upon feedback - your note is too general I need a bit more direction please.

It is written like a resume - bullet point list for exhibitions, list of scores etc. It is not the set-up we would expect in an encyclopaedia. Boleyn (talk) 11:42, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The topic of this article may not meet Wikipedia's notability guideline for biographies. (January 2020) Why? your note is too general I need a bit more direction please. I read the guidelines so please avoid directing me to another page as much as answer from a human to human. What should I do to fix the issue?

You've read the guidelines, which guidelines do you feel it meets and why? I can't see how it meets WP:MUSICBIO or WP:GNG, but I may be missing something. Boleyn (talk) 11:42, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (January 2020) Where is that? I'm happy to remove it if you think any ads included, that was not the intention when first created.

From reading it, the entire article reads like it was written by someone trying to promote the artist. Boleyn (talk) 11:42, 19 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Let me know please, Kinda (KindaHamwi1 (talk) 10:08, 19 January 2020 (UTC))[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Iyad Rimawi (March 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This subject does not appear to be notable based on the current content provided.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 03:18, 25 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Iyad Rimawi has been accepted

Iyad Rimawi, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 21:05, 25 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]