User talk:Kimkev1/Clean Ocean Action
Peer Review
[edit]Hi Kevin,
You did a great job with updating the lead through your rephrases and added citation! Your updated Lead is very clear and concise in laying out the article's topic and brief description of the article's major sections.
Wow, you added a substantial amount of content to your chosen topic. All your added content are very organized and well sectioned, which are easy to follow. A little suggestion here would be maybe putting the 'objectives' section right under the 'history' section, then followed by 'volunteer' section and end with 'programs' section? I think this order might make your article flow better? All in all, your content information are up-to-date as a lot of them are from current websites, so great job!
Regarding tone and balance, I think your content information was consistent with a neutral and informative tone. I think your topic itself is a pretty neutral topic too, so good choice!
I clicked through all your sources, and they look reliable as a lot of them are either from legit and official websites, and well-cited academic journals and articles. A lot of your sources seem current as well.
Overall, the content that you've added really improved the article since you've contributed a lot of needed and relevant information for the topic. The information in your article are well cited, with very reliable sources. I genuinely think you've done a great job of adding quality content, but if you still want to add more information (maybe consider adding a business section that works with this organization?). Another thing I think you can consider working on is adding hyperlinks?
Awesome job and I'm excited to see the final result :)
@Kimkev1: Kimndo (talk) 05:11, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hi Kimkev1,
This was a very nice page. Layout was organized and easy to read, tone was neutral. Articles were up to date and worked. I liked how you added a section about volunteers and how you can get involved. The only suggestion I might add is perhaps some photos. Other than that, great job! Fronado (talk) 06:42, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
Thank you
[edit]Thank you all for your awesome feedback! I'm glad that my article draft is easy to read and the layout is good. Thank you! @Kimdo: @Fronado: Kimkev1 (talk) 17:45, 25 October 2020 (UTC)