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Hello, Khanyat2000, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

You may also want to complete the Wikipedia Adventure, an interactive tour that will help you learn the basics of editing Wikipedia. You can visit the Teahouse to ask questions or seek help.

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask for help on your talk page, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! --Teetee taw (talk) 14:09, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 01

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Please complete online student training at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete all five basic modules. (Wikipedia policies, ..., Finding your article) After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited at least three pages on the English Wikipedia.

Special:Contributions/Khanyat2000 at this time shows that you have not finished:

  • sandbox [1] (N.B. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.)
  • be bold [2]
  • talk page tutorial [3]

You need to be logged in on a desktop platform, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. The links above take you straight into the pages where you can launch interactive tutorials. We expect to see you create three new pages during the this training exercise. --Teetee taw (talk) 14:09, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 02

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General instruction
  • You are going to see history of pages on Wikipedia to learn how volunteers collaboratively develop content and media. We would like you to learn from the edits made by our students in the past terms. The list of terms, students and articles can be found at user:Taweetham/WEP.
  • All tasks must be answered by using Special:Diff. See Help:Diff for further detailed instructions and see an example below
Tasks
  1. Read WP:NOT. Find an example of student edit on an article AND warning message that the student received on his/her talk page.
  2. Read Wikipedia:Edit warring. Find an example of student edits on an article (it requires several edits to be an edit warring) AND warning that the student received on his/her talk page.
  3. Read WP:COPYVIO. Find an example of a student who has been warned about it on his/her talk page. Find an example (Wikipedia diff on an article) where copyrighted media (image, VDO or sound files) is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Task 1: -An example of student edit on the article Special:Diff/726039144 -A warning message that the student received on his/her talk page Special:Diff/829456350

Task 2: -An example of student edits on an article Special:Diff/636831004/634705830 -Warning that the student received on his/her talk page Special:Diff/636835165/636805545

Task 3: -An example of a student who has been warned on talk page Special:Diff/787084283/783422527 -An example where copyrighted is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article Special:Diff/786345747/prev


Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:20, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 10:00, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 03

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Please propose a topic or two that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles/policies on Wikipedia and provide the following information.

  1. Your proposed article(s) (New or existing STUB article relating to a chemical compound, reaction, equipment or technique - or related to your major/interest. (see Category:Stub-Class Chemistry articles))
    • For new article, explain briefly why it passes WP:NOTE.
    • For existing topics, explain briefly the state/structure of the current article.
      • Is the structure & existing content appropriate?
        • If not, restructure or remove content as per WP:MOS and WP:NOT before you move to the next stage.
  2. Brief outline of your contributions to the article
    • In what section & what content
      • Make sure it belongs to the article and it is encyclopedic. See WP:NOT for things that should NOT be added.
      • Make sure that it is not redundant to existing articles. Use Google search "site:wikipedia.org" rather than Wikipedia search.
    • References for the article
    • Media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.
      • You may suggest plan to create your own work and upload to Wikimedia Commons
      • You may use existing media on Wikimedia Commons. Use Google image search "site:wikimedia.org" rather than Wikimedia Commons search.
  3. Examples/template/related articles that you will use as a model to develop your nominated article.
    • In terms of WP:MOS/formatting - your article will have similar style/format/tone to these articles.
    • In terms of content - your article will link to or will be linked from these articles.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Taweetham (talk) 10:00, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  1. My Proposed Article : Black snake (firework)
    • This article already exist but lack of information. This article only contain the description of the experiment.
    • I believe that I can add more appropriate information.
  2. Brief outline of your contributions to the article
  3. Examples/template/related articles

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Khanyat2000 (talk • contribs) 15:09, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 08:45, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 04

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Your topic is approved and added to the course page. Please develop the proposal into the first draft in your sandbox.

  • For existing article, you may copy some parts of the existing article to your sandbox to see how revision/integration of content would work. You will copy the code back to the article at later stage.
  • For new article, you may want to copy parts of a template article to your sandbox to see what sections are necessary. The sandbox will be moved to the article namespace at later stage. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.

In all cases, do not copy more than what is necessary. For example, do not copy any categories to your sandbox. --Taweetham (talk) 08:45, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"How to" may be considered WP:NOT. Please make sure that you find way to do a positive addition to the article. --Taweetham (talk) 10:31, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Please see if {{cite news}} or {{cite web}} is more appropriate. You should not repeatedly do the full citation for the same reference and, as a result, make the reference list longer. Rather, name the reference and call it by that name in later citation. I did one example for you. --Taweetham (talk) 15:18, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 15:19, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 05

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Your work has been reviewed. Majority of the content/formatting is ok. Please carefully move encyclopedic part of your sandbox to article namespace so that the general public can see it. Here are some tips to help you complete the transition to online editing.

  1. Content/Formatting policies
  2. Technicalities
    • Unlike sandbox, all edits will be public immediately and it is important to make sure that all of your edits are acceptable. You may use preview button and provide edit summary to help you.
    • Any "page save" on Wikipedia even outside article namespace is permanently recorded and can be retrieved by the public. Please think carefully before you click save and before you revert other people edits. No work is lost but only the latest version of the page is shown to the public. Deletion of pages (or versions of pages) is only possible by admins if it falls under Wikipedia:Deletion policy. You can request admins to do deletion or other prescribed tasks should the need arises.
    • You may want to set watchlist and notifications so that you can catch up with changes made to your article and your talk page by other editors.
  3. Community interactions
    • You will be interacting with other volunteers when you make edits on the article namespace. Please respect other users in the community and assume good faith.
    • If your work is reverted or modified in any other ways, do not engage in a edit war. Rather use discussion page of your article to settle issues.
    • You may be blocked from Wikipedia for failure to observe community rules.

We hope you enjoy seeing product of your hard work read by many people in the years to come. --Taweetham (talk) 15:19, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It took some time to reformat your work. [4] Please study these changes carefully before you add further content to the article. Can you add book references to the article? We probably have a few good books in the library on the topic. --Taweetham (talk) 01:34, 20 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Please pay attention to WP:NOT as I have previously mentioned to you. Some of you content has now been removed. You can see the page history for more specific comments. --Taweetham (talk) 05:30, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I tried my best to find my topic in the book already but I cannot find any relevant information relating to the experiment so I did find some more informations on other websites ka. I have added more information in the Chemistry of experiment section and add another section about explanation, please check in my sandbox ka Ajarn.Khanyat2000 (talk) 14:40, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 07

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For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: Wikipedia contributions must meet the minimum quantity requirement to be graded.

Quantity
  • We generally expect at least 5,000 characters (counted by xtools's authorship attribution) to the assigned article unless you upload media file(s) and/or help contribute to classmate article(s).
  • If media are created by you, uploaded to the Wikimedia Commons and used in the article, either 1,000 or 2,000 or 3,000 characters credit will be given, regardless of the number of media uploaded.
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to sound files(s).
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to image(s).
    • 2,000 characters credit will be given to video(s).
  • If you help classmate(s) to edit their articles or create media files for uses in classmates' articles, up to 1,000 bytes of your contributions may be counted. Your classmate(s) must remain in the Wikipedia assignment program at the end of the term so that the articles can be counted.
  • All of the work must be created by you and recorded under your username.
  • No outstanding WP:COPVIO issues for both text and media.

The work will be graded based on quality and process criteria:

Quality

Learn from similar articles on Wikipedia (preferably higher quality than the article you are working on).

  • Structure
  • Content
    • All information are relevant to the article and written in encyclopedic tone. (Understand WP:NOT.)
    • Text are clearly supported by reliable sources. (Follow WP:REF.)
    • Do final clean up and proofreading.
  • Formatting & housekeeping
    • Formatting (citation e.g. {{cite web}}}, {{cite journal}} and {{cite book}}, heading styles, bullet/numbered point, font face, table, position/layout/caption of images etc.)
    • Other issues (course tag on talk page of your article, make sure you add categories to your article(s) and media)
    • File names in Wikimedia commons or reference name in the article should be sensible and helpful for other editors.
    • Unnecessary files, pages e.g. redirection are nominated for deletion.
    • To produce desired formatting, learn from source codes of other articles on Wikipedia or ask classmates/other Wikipedians.
Process
  • Complete the assignment on time.
  • Understand Wikipedia articles and policies by independent reading.
  • Take appropriate action on comments given by the community/instructor.
  • Provide edit summary for every edit on the article namespace.
  • If conflict arises, do not engage in edit war. Use talk page/discussion pages to resolve the issue.
  • Help improve classmates' articles.
  • Thank other editors/reviewers of your article.

--Taweetham (talk) 05:17, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 08

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Hi Khanyat2000! This is an impression of a full reading of the article Black snake (firework). I am confused by inconsistency and lack of connection in the article.

  1. What is the difference or what is the definition of Black snake and sugar snake? How are they related to the "Sodium bicarbonate version" and " Mercury(II) thiocyanate version"? I made revisions to subsection names to my understanding. Please see if this is correct. However, the difference of sugar snake and carbon snake is still probably needed in the sugar snake section.
  2. Why are similar subsections called "Chemistry" and "Experiment"? Please check with a good example and WP:MOS.
  3. Wikipedia is not for how to information. However, as the article stands, I believe that some information may be missing as to the setting of the experiment. I remember that sands are needed for sugar snake. Why? Is that necessary?
  4. I think we agreed on some other references to be included in your article. I just added it in and relocated content from Mercury(II) thiocyanate.
  5. We can now think about media production (VDO/picture) for this article.

--Taweetham (talk) 06:30, 3 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 08

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Hi Khanyat2000! Are we settled on the content or you wish to add anything further? --Taweetham (talk) 02:00, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I think I am settled and will not add anything more ka. Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:06, 15 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 10

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You are now assigned a mentor SoonLorpai (talk · contribs). --Taweetham (talk) 06:23, 16 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 11

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@SoonLorpai: Your mentor will provide detailed feedback in the next few days. I have identified a number of problems at this point:

  1. After I reorganized the article, you contribution has fallen below 3,000 bytes. Please see if you can add anything else to the text.
  2. Please make sure that your language is encyclopedic and academic. For example, the sentence "The carbon is what makes the snake black." can propably br rewritten.

--Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 23 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have not complete the assignment. Please complete it as soon as possible to remain in our program. --Taweetham (talk) 08:36, 25 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the spectacular photo.
  1. Can you add category on Commons for all of your uploads? (for better re-use of the materials)
  2. Can you overwrite (upload a new version of) the File:Result_of_black_snake_experiment.jpg with a full resolution photo? (for better re-use of the materials)
  3. Can you upload and add a video as well?
  4. Can you specify that ratio is 4:1 by mass and specify how much ethanol is used?

--Taweetham (talk) 02:00, 26 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I add more pictures and video already ka. Khanyat2000 (talk) 02:04, 26 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Can you upload the original video as well? It think we can create a new category on commons for this. --Taweetham (talk) 17:05, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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October 2019

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Information icon Hello. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

When editing Wikipedia, there is a field labeled "Edit summary" below the main edit box. It looks like this:

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I noticed your recent edit to Black snake (firework) does not have an edit summary. Please be sure to provide a summary of every edit you make, even if you write only the briefest of summaries. The summaries are very helpful to people browsing an article's history.

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Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. You can give yourself a reminder to add an edit summary by setting Preferences → Editing → Tick Prompt me when entering a blank edit summary. I know this is mentioned in the training and guidelines materials that were given to you as part of your project. DMacks (talk) 08:14, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the information, I will do it next time.Khanyat2000 (talk) 15:13, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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