User talk:Ken Lee/sandbox

Overall I liked the content of the additions that you added. Watch out for sentence structure because you sometimes have slightly confusing structures. Try to be more straightforward so that anyone can easily understand. I would also try to consider trying to explain the methodology in a more concise way if that can be done. Also look at one of your reference sources because it seems to be incorrect. Great article! 152.42.188.21 (talk) 01:25, 24 September 2016 (UTC)