User talk:Kelchango/Tomb of the Diver

Hi, I think you've done a great job laying out your article.A few things I can think of for improvement include finding some sources for the material that was already in your article. It looks like there's some really good information in there, it would be lovely to keep it in. In a similar vein, I think finding some new sources could help solidify your information's validity. The last two suggestions would be finding a place for the “Unfolded view of the slabs” phrase in the bottom of your description section, and you may want to change “Analyizing” to Analyzing too. This is going great so far, keep it up!

I can't wait to read it when you've finished. MadelineMadrid (talk) 23:03, 5 November 2021 (UTC)