User talk:Kcueva/sandbox
Hi Kcueva,
Consider rephrasing this sentence. It is a little wordy regarding the parent's passed down morals. The development of moral courage within parenting looks at not only on the parent's passed down moral values but the children's autonomy on how to perceive and practice their moral values.[2]
Also I know we aren't required to write a bunch, but you mentioned going into more detail about moral courage. Maybe another example would aid to the importance of moral courage, and allow the reader to attain a better understanding of the concept.
K shad17 (talk) 20:49, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi K shad17,
Thank you for input. I will take that paraphrase into consideration as I edit that section.
And I did mention about adding more sections to the article but I'm still in search for good sources to go into the direction I wish to pursue. And I want to make sure I keep a certain flow with this article since it is kind of like I'm starting from scratch.
Kcueva (talk) 07:41, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]The only improvement I can think of was to find maybe one more source for the section that you're adding on moral courage. Other than that I think that your additions were very well thought out and neutral. Good Job.KarenKoepp7 (talk) 06:31, 28 February 2017 (UTC)