User talk:Katied95/sandbox

Peer Review of Article Draft

I would suggest finding or producing a image (spectrogram) that shows the for notes (A, B, C, D) of the chickadee call as well as the "fee-bee" song . I think this would really improve the visualization of the call/song. Be careful not to cite any literature that lists Dr. Wilson as an author as this would be a conflict of interest. Also, remember to source any information that is not considered common knowledge. I noticed you want to discuss the reason behind different lengths of chickadee calls and in what context these differences can be found. It might also be interesting to briefly discuss how the fee-bee song is retained in some related species (e.g. Carolina Chickadee) and "disappears" in others (e.g. Boreal Chickadee). As for sex differences in call production, I recommend checking out the work by Hahn and Sturdy.

Jpethier (talk) 16:12, 27 October 2017 (UTC)jpethier