User talk:Karahabo/sandbox

This is a well written article that has a lot of good information! The format is spot on for breaking down the types of tissue injury and then explaining examples in more detail. My only advise would be that you might want to re-site your sources again next to more of the information.Awalcant (talk) 04:06, 10 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lot of well said information about soft tissue injury. You did an outstanding job breaking it up section by section. But it still needs some work. I think a picture would add a lot of spice to the article, also a few more sources doesn't hurt. On the right track though keep up the A1 work. :)Jonnybling (talk) 03:30, 11 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

could you add to the actual and overuse section? I'd like to see a reference to a scholarly source made in that section. also, an image would be a good addition. Ctysick (talk) 16:29, 29 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]