User talk:Kanwar Faizan

September 2024

Hello, I'm Win8x. An edit that you recently made to List of massacres during the Syrian civil war seemed to be a test and has been reverted. If you want to practice editing, please use your sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks! win8x (talking | spying) 21:23, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Thank you for notifying! I am new to this and would love to learn more about editing. Some tips and tricks will be highly appreciated.

Thank you! Kanwar Faizan (talk) 22:53, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's okay! It looked as if you made a mistake. I've included a welcome message below with links to help you edit on Wikipedia. Have a good day! win8x (talking | spying) 23:21, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy editing! Cheers, win8x (talking | spying) 23:21, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

October 2024

Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to 2017 ICC Champions Trophy. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. - Arjayay (talk) 09:46, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for helping me. Please check this if you have a little time to spare. I have toned this version down. I was trying to contribte as the name of the winner was not mentioned in the article. Let me know if this is better or needs improvement and I will post this.

"The 2017 ICC Champions Trophy final, held on June 18 at The Oval in London, saw Pakistan and India against each other. After being put in to bat, Pakistan posted a total of 338/4, with notalble contributions like century from young opener Fakhar Zaman (114) and contributions from Azhar Ali and Mohammad Hafeez. India, known for their strong batting lineup, were down 33/3. The rest of the lineup folded quickly, with Hardik Pandya's fighting 76 being the only resistance. Pakistan bowled India out for just 158, securing 180-run win and claiming their first-ever Champions Trophy title in a match that remains memorable for the performance displayed by Pakistan in all aspects of the game."

Please comment here as I would like to post this myself. Thanks again for helping :) Kanwar Faizan (talk) 19:56, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please stop. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy by adding commentary and your personal analysis into articles, as you did at 2017 ICC Champions Trophy, you may be blocked from editing. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 04:28, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2 advices,

Make sure you're following the Neutral point of view, while editing.
Do not mark your edits as minor edits unnecessarily.

Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 06:23, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for notifying, I am new here and want your guidance, all I want to do is add winners name in the article. On a positive note identify the mistakes so I don't make them anymore. I have tried writing this again, let me know if this is something I should add:

The 2017 ICC Champions Trophy final, held on June 18 at The Oval in London, featured a match between Pakistan and India. After being asked to bat first, Pakistan posted a competitive total of 338/4, with significant contributions from Fakhar Zaman, who scored a century (114), as well as Azhar Ali and Mohammad Hafeez. India's highly regarded batting lineup struggled early, finding themselves at 33/3. Despite a resilient 76 from Hardik Pandya, the remainder of the Indian team was quickly dismissed, and India was bowled out for 158. Pakistan secured a comprehensive 180-run victory, claiming their first Champions Trophy title. The match is remembered for Pakistan's all-around strong performance. Kanwar Faizan (talk) 15:52, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The 2017 ICC Champions Trophy final, held on 18 June at The Oval, London, was played between Pakistan and India. India won the toss and decided to field first. Batting first, Pakistan posted a total of 338/4, with contributions from Fakhar Zaman (114), Azhar Ali (59) and Mohammad Hafeez (57). India's batting lineup struggled early, finding themselves at 33/3. Despite a 76 from Hardik Pandya, the remainder of the Indian team was quickly dismissed, and India was bowled out for 158.^[1] Thus, Pakistan secured a 180-run victory, claiming their first Champions Trophy title.^[2] Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 00:59, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "IND vs PAK Cricket Scorecard, Final at London, June 18, 2017". ESPNcricinfo. Retrieved 2024-10-12.
^ "New champions: Zaman, Amir and Pakistan raze India for title". ESPNcricinfo. 2017-06-18. Retrieved 2024-10-12.

[1] "IND vs PAK Cricket Scorecard, Final at London, June 18, 2017". ESPNcricinfo. Retrieved 2024-10-12.

[2] "New champions: Zaman, Amir and Pakistan raze India for title". ESPNcricinfo. 2017-06-18. Retrieved 2024-10-12.

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