User talk:Kabrannon/sandbox

From Your Conservation Biology Professor

Thank you for creating your sandbox. I look forward to following your progress as you develop your assignment for Conservation Biology. Kyleharms (talk) 22:26, 1 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like you are making progress. Even so, you still need to substantially flesh out the details of your outline, add citations to references, and add additional references. Kyleharms (talk) 15:13, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You have several long quotations from other sources that should be removed or re-written in your own words. In addition, I would recommend removing the section containing the staff members and re-name the section "Some Studies" - if these are representative case studies you might refer to them as "Case Studies." Kyleharms (talk) 17:03, 2 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]