User talk:Kab055mun/Anting (bird activity)

Peer Review (New points are marked by a "-", and bold words are my edit suggestions) -Under "Active Anting", an example of birds which do this in the sentence that says most birds do this would be nice, for example "Most species of birds practice active anting and do this individually (e.g. bird species A) or in small groups (e.g. bird species B). -I really like the "Anting in Blue Jays" content, great use of research supporting the innate behaviour, also very interesting that they eat the ant even after they've rubbed it on themselves. -Under your lead edits, next to the sentence you have added it says "ref name = "Osborn"/>", is this meant to be there? -Under "Substitutes of Ants", I know you mentioned before that blue jays performed anting as an innate behaviour, but here you state that substitution is an error of learning. Is anting only innate in blue jays? -Ref list: references 1-5 & 15-18 are the same. All sources are reliable journals. -Overall: Very interesting read. I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, however, I am very bad for them so I am not likely to point them out. I think this is a strong expansion on the current Anting (bird activity) Wikipedia page. If possible, maybe add in a new image. (Jthornhill16 (talk) 15:21, 31 October 2019 (UTC)).