User talk:Jvien15/sandbox
1. This is one of the pages I would be interested in adopting and editing. I think that the page needs to include more concrete examples of what has happened up to this point in the criminal justice system and maybe some suggestive examples of how to help each state. I think it would be a smart idea to include a section on each state in the United States and what they have done and what could improve based on what resources and textbooks say the perfect system is. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criminal_justice_reform_in_the_United_States
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[edit]Great job identifying what needs to be added. The next step is to add the research and synthesize your sources to create a narrative form of the page that fills in your outline. Please be sure to have done much of this prior to Tuesday. Mosterbur (talk) 15:05, 19 November 2017 (UTC)Mosterbur
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You might want to add what the fiscal and more impacts of mass incarceration are to your arguments section and you can link mass incarceration to a Wikipedia page. You should explain more about what the reform entailed and remember it is at a 5th grade reading level.
MSherman (talk) 23:46, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]I think you have a general plan for your article but I defiantly would start adding to the article . Everything you do have however seems to be a solid plan including your sources , I think in the end this will be a great article --ATetr (talk) 03:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)