User talk:Justinkui83/sandbox
Hey Justin,
Your article about healthy diets was a great read! The information you provided on various conditions was very well written and from a neutral point of view. It seems like you used plenty of great resources and citations as well.
To add onto your article, I think you should add a See Also Section, along with building out the epilepsy section more. You should add more specific conditions as well and more specific diets that lead to a healthy lifestyle.
I think one other thing you can do to improve your article is breaking out paragraphs more to emphasize different points. Sometimes it can get a little jumbled if you don't break out the paragraphs.
Best, Ken
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