User talk:Jus.Hong
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[edit]Hello, Jus.Hong, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 24 February 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi, I have read over your sandbox and I have some feedback for you. I think instead of writing the article you plan on writing, which reads a bit like a persuasive essay, you should instead write a factual, neutral article about the Vaporfly model of Nike shoes. Mechanical doping has a different meaning on Wikipedia and in the sources I briefly scanned online (referring solely to cycling), and I don't see where reliable sources refer to using special shoes as "mechanical doping". Also, please avoid rhetorical questions like "how far can shoe companies push technology until an unfair advantage is built and competition becomes driven by an unfair technological advantage?" Encyclopedic writing should be quite dry and bland. We don't need to add color or flair to make the writing more exciting. Also please ensure that you are citing your sources correctly. Right now you just have bare URLs at the bottom of each section. To review how to properly format references, please review this training. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:14, 11 March 2020 (UTC)