User talk:Jsanti21/sandbox
Make sure to title your abstract section and the first paragraph sentences of this section need to be reworded. Good job on your signs and symptoms section! Overall the paper seems to be good! Hesther23 (talk) 00:58, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
The original article was very well written and your contributions served to make the article even more understandable. There is one citation that is needed so maybe look into adding/find one for that particular statement. Overall very easy to understand and follow. --Asanto22 (talk) 03:26, 16 November 2019 (UTC)
- Right now, you haven't made enough improvements to the original article to have completed this assignment.
- Missing recent research.
- Needs a mechanism section. Some of this is in the cause with the gene, but it could be elaborated on and more connections could be made.