User talk:Jropeach
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[edit]Hello, Jropeach, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:00, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
Alice Wu
[edit]Major revisions necessary. This is a great start! Before moving your work to mainspace, I recommend the following revisions:
- Right now you have about half the prose that you will need to get full credit for this assignment. Make sure that you contribute at least 500 words of new prose.
- The one source listed in your draft is already listed on Wu’s page. Add at least three more reliable and independent secondary sources that are not already on her page. I recommend checking the university’s subscription databases.
- Turn all the "refs" into actual footnotes.
- You will likely want to make a Saving Face section on Wu’s page, but make sure it doesn’t overlap too much with the Saving Face Wikipedia page.
Chronophoto (talk) 17:45, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
- I want to add to this that you need to be very careful to avoid original research. Keep in mind that we can only summarize what has already been stated and that any claims, opinions, or similar should be attributed to the person(s) making the claim. You also want to make sure that you don't rely too heavily on quotes to fill up space. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:18, 24 October 2019 (UTC)
This is a well-done article. I would add a little more information to the intro paragraph or summarize key points in the article to give a little more general information.
- Foobar- was there any reason that the show was not picked up by ABC, I would mention the article that it never made pre-production as you have said with a few of her other projects.
- Leah Lewis does not have a page to link to now. I would remove the hyperlink to avoid any confusion
- Foreign Babes in Beijing: Behind the Scenes of a New China has a page you could link to in the article.
- After Foobar, 2008-2019, did she do anything else aside from filmmaking? Philanthropy? Did she go back to her old career? Any information to help fill the time gap
- Is there a picture that you can add?