User talk:Jrhombe/sandbox
I enjoy reading about this parasite. It was easy to follow the life cycle of the parasite. The life cycle was really informative. I would prefer the subheadings in Life cycle to be deleted. Maybe, find a way that you can just use all that information into just one section? Or separate the intermediate stage and description then the definite stage and description. Also, I prefer to use the BEHAVIORAL DIFFERENCES into another section, if that is possible.I think it could be good to use in life style,or maybe part of an introduction.
I believe DISTRIBUTION AND HISTORY can be part of an introduction, in my opinion. Its a good way to start off talking about the parasite and a great way to start off the article. What you have now is great and really informative. This will turn out into a great addition to the article.
Lynamai (talk)Lyndsey RoseLynamai (talk) 19:48, 9 March 2020 (UTC)