User talk:Jqp5962

This user is a student editor in Penn_State_Lehigh_Valley/English_202A_Writing_in_the_Social_Sciences_(Fall_2022) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:04, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Moved article back to sandbox

Hi there, I moved your article back to your sandbox at User:Jqp5962/Consumerism because it was not ready for the mainspace. A couple of points of feedback:

Writing Style & Format:Currently, the content reads and is formatted like an essay, which is fine for other assignments in your course but not for Wikipedia. Remember, the goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary of the topic at hand, not to persuade the readers. I recommend reading over pgs. 7-9 of Editing Wikipedia before you rewrite to check out some examples of what is appropriate prose for Wikipedia.

Inline Citations:As you edit your content, keep in mind every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.

Topic Choice:There is an existing Consumerism article that covers the ideas you expanded. I recommend improving the existing article with your contributions as an option moving forward.

If you have any questions, feel free to reach out.Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:31, 18 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]