User talk:Joy78
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[edit]Hello, Joy78, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:18, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]I really enjoyed the article and I feel that your edits contributed a lot. There is a section for "World Heritage Site 677" with only one sentence in it. I'd say that this section can be eliminated and the sentence included elsewhere. As for sources, they are all pretty solid with the exception of the Telegraph article. It may have good information, but that can be traced backwards to a more solid academic publication. Citations are pretty scarce in the Historical Context situation. Make sure you cite more frequently. The information is solid, it just needs to be further backed up by being connected to your sources. ---OBensel
I reviewd the article Mecca Flats, and posted comments on the wiki users talk page