User talk:Joverholser
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[edit]Hello, Joverholser, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:25, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]It looks like you have a lot of great material! Just a few small notes: You may want to make sure that your sentence structure doesn't get too clunky (Rise to Power section) just because it makes the article a little less readable. Also important to use active, not passive voice. Maybe employ more primary sources? I'm having a tough time finding them for my article, I'm sure you're experiencing the same thing.
Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Msfinkel (talk • contribs) 00:43, 11 April 2017 (UTC)