User talk:Joshmobobsmith
September 2008
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Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to Soil has been reverted, as it appears to be unconstructive. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you. J.delanoygabsadds 00:01, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
The recent edit you made to Soil constitutes vandalism, and has been reverted. Please do not continue to vandalize pages; use the sandbox for testing. Thank you. Miquonranger03 (talk) 00:35, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Please do not vandalize pages, as you did with this edit to Soil. If you continue to do so, you will be blocked from editing. Miquonranger03 (talk) 00:38, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
I know that your edit was made in good faith, but it isn't really necessary to say that. The reason soil helps plants grow is that it contains macro and micronutrients that help the plant grow, so it's inaccurate to say the soil itself is what does so; rather, it is what is made up of. It is very possible to grow plants without soil, simply providing them with the nutrients that the soil would offer (this is known as hydroponics). Secondly, using the word "our" is a term more often used in an essay about a topic, rather than an encyclopedia entry. The main difference is the tone, and often, articles on Wikipedia get tagged as "sounding too much like an essay." I hope this helped you understand why I removed your edit. I also hope very much that you continue to expand Wikipedia in the future. Miquonranger03 (talk) 01:16, 3 September 2008 (UTC) :) P.S. When editing a talk page, please make a new section for each issue you have or whatever you would like to say. This is done by clicking the "new section" link at the top of the page. When you have said what you like, type four tildes, or ~~~~ at the end of your entry to sign it. This helps a lot because the reader knows who has said what, so it is easier to respond to.