User talk:Joseph Archibald Whadji

Etornam James Flolu D.C.E edit

Creating content on Etornam James Flolu DCE for Afadzato South Joseph Archibald Whadji (talk) 03:53, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy editing! Wikishovel (talk) 10:11, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stem Education in Ghana (June 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Wikishovel were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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Wikishovel (talk) 10:11, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Joseph Archibald Whadji! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Wikishovel (talk) 10:11, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stem Education in Ghana (July 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Asilvering were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This reads like PR for the Ghanaian government. At first I thought I would edit it to remove some of the more PR-type language, and then accept the draft - but there's actually very little I can keep here. Please restrict this to the facts, in WP:NPOV language. WP:WTW may be of use to you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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asilvering (talk) 19:27, 18 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]