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Barkeep49 (talk) 15:10, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Dylan Roberts

Hello, Eddy Bais17,

Thank you for creating Dylan Roberts.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Both the biography and legislative sections go on too long. More secondary sources (e.g. newspapers) should be found.

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Barkeep49 (talk) 15:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

User:Barkeep49 Hi there,

Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it! I just had a couple of questions regarding your feedback. For the biography and legislative sections what would you recommend taking out to shorten it up? Thank you so much!

I did not see this question until now because the ping did not work. I came here to caution you about ownership of Dylan Roberts. You should not be reverting every changes others make. The current wording of his legislative achievements strikes me as promotional rather than informative. For instance with HB19-1216 I would suggest the final 4 sentences (everything starting with "Roberts said") should be removed as overly detailed (not to mention the NPOV problems). Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 17:09, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your response, i will make those edits now! As for reverting changes, I reverted the changes because in the changes the user put senator in front of all of the representatives mentioned which is not their correct title.

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