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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pickaso Guitar Bow (November 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by HitroMilanese were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hitro talk 11:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Hitro!

Thank you very much for your prompt review—I truly appreciate your contributions to the Wikipedia community.

I read your feedback and wanted to clarify: if citing the product's official website is not considered a reliable source, would the article from Vintage Guitar magazine (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vintage_Guitar_(magazine)) be sufficient? Here’s the link to the specific article for reference: https://www.vintageguitar.com/37559/the-pickaso-guitar-bow/. I had included it as a reference in the draft.

Besides the citing issues, are there any additional areas I should address to improve the draft?

Many thanks! Jonathanshenhav (talk) 13:03, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jonathanshenhav! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Hitro talk 11:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pickaso Guitar Bow (November 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

We usually want to see a minimum of three reliable, independent, sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Pickaso Guitar Bow and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Qcne (talk) 12:33, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]