User talk:Jomoh001/sandbox

It seems like you have very reliable sources and do a really good job about balancing the amount of information that you use from those sources. You keep a neutral tone through out. For the sentence discussing electric fields, it would be helpful to write "electric fields (EFs)" so you can refer to them as EFs later on or in other sentences. What other topics will you hope to discuss about neurites? I wasn't able to find the external links you were referring to and saw that there was a citation needed, but I assumed you were working on that. Great job so far! Merchantofvenice9 (talk) 21:59, 14 October 2016 (UTC)Merchantofvenice9

I think you have a really good background for neurite development, but I am wondering if that is going to be focusing on? If it is, then I think you have a really good start. but if you plan to talk more about neurites, i think it would be good to have some sort of outline so you can see what needs to be added rather than adding as you go. AInWonderland (talk) 21:08, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Great article & feedback! ProfJRL (talk) 23:33, 23 October 2016 (UTC)