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Your submission at Articles for creation: Luna Parc (May 9)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by WikiDan61 was: undefined

WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 18:26, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Luna Parc (May 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The tone of the article still has a promotional slant, attributing adjectives like it is fact rather than what other neutral parties have described the place. The citations need to be scrubbed as they provide too much information (such as street address) about the website's location.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 17:16, 15 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Luna Parc has been accepted

Luna Parc, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:33, 15 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A belated welcome!

Here's wishing you a belated welcome to Wikipedia, JoelDougal. I see that you've already been around a while and wanted to thank you for your contributions. Though you seem to have been successful in finding your way around, you may benefit from following some of the links below, which help editors get the most out of Wikipedia:

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Again, welcome! - AquilaFasciata (talk | contrib) 17:07, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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