User talk:Joedibella7497
Welcome!
[edit]Hello, Joedibella7497, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:12, 25 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I'm sorry if I'm not doing this correctly, this whole project is kind of unorganized and discombobulating. The instructions for peer review was to submit to someone's talk page on their progress for their article. So I'm reviewing the article (Environmental Migrants) that I see you are assigned to and posting it here because I randomly picked you. Sorry if that is weird or this is incorrect. Thanks!
-The article has a lot of direct quotes, rather than forming the information in your groups own words. It would make the article stronger and more accordance with the guidelines if the majority of direct quotations were removed and the information discusses uniquely.
-The "Type" section does not have a citation. It links to another Wiki page but does not show citations on this page.
-Strong Lead section. Reading it gives a basic understanding of the topic.
-The flow of the article sections is logical and is easy to follow and understand. Some of the sections may benefit from formatting that makes it easier to read.
-It has a large number of good sources for information.
Partguypartshark (talk) 01:41, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
A cheeseburger for you!
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Hey Joe, thanks for meeting with the group and thanks for your contributions JasperBloodsworth (talk) 06:38, 23 February 2017 (UTC) |