User talk:Joannairene/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography

Joanna: You might consider adding the Kusrini citation and another Jensen citation (the thesis). Njclum (talk) 21:52, 11 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on Outline

Joanna: Good job!Njclum (talk) 01:47, 22 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review on Rough Draft- Kaylee

Joanna: Good information, Re-read to fix some spelling errors. Maybe try to describe in a little more detail so it doesn't sound as much like a list. Other then that, the information is good just some minor fixes! Kaylee.gorey (talk) 22:07, 22 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on Rough Draft

Joanna: Great job! Don't forget to italicize scientific names. My primary comment is that there appears to be more information in your outline than in your draft. FYI, incubation (not gestation) is the correct term; gestation implies internal development.Njclum (talk) 23:41, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]