User talk:JoJoyce Shang

This user is a student editor in University_of_Washington/Online_Communities_(Fall_2024) .

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Hello, JoJoyce Shang, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:20, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article choice

I think I Am What I Am (2021 film) is a great article choice with lots of room to grow. I look forward to seeing what you put together! —mako ๛ 00:00, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hi @JoJoyce Shang! I just wanted to let you know I left a peer review for you. Hope it helps, I enjoyed reading your article :) Jeniseberry (talk) 21:37, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your feedback! JoJoyce Shang (talk) 02:10, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that adding a bit more on the plot, main actors, and overall impression would give readers a stronger introduction. I’ll expand the lead slightly while keeping it concise, providing just enough context to set up the rest of the article.

I’ll add more information about the sequel, especially since it’s been planned to be released in 2024 (It's not released yet). I’ll also link to the sequel’s Wikipedia page to make it easier for readers to explore related content.

I’ll try to expand the plot to give a fuller picture, which may appeal to readers who want a complete overview of the storyline. Additionally, I’ll investigate if there were other relevant controversies and elaborate on the significance of the existing controversy for context.

I’ll also create a cast section to provide details on the actors, their roles, and possibly the casting process, adding depth to the article.

I’ll enhance the reception section with a wider range of critical perspectives and add more citations throughout to clarify source references. JoJoyce Shang (talk) 02:21, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sub-page Reviewed

Hi Joyce! Did a very good job about ur article! I have already created the sub-page for you! Roderick Ren (talk) 23:48, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your feedback! JoJoyce Shang (talk) 02:10, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I’ve added more context to the lead, introducing key background elements like the film’s production. This will create a more comprehensive opening. I agree that insights into the film’s critical reception and global performance would be valuable. I’ll research reviews from reputable critics and include international box office data to show its worldwide impact. Since the film is a 2021 film, many articles have already expired. I'll try to find some more resources to cite. JoJoyce Shang (talk) 02:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]