User talk:Jnaeagbenla
Topic for Project
[edit]Toni Morrison
List of Contributions
[edit]- Edit the themes: Add some more information by providing additional themes about beloved because there are more themes that can be found within this text.
- Edit and add more sufficient stronger analysis for this text.
- Plot summary needs to be edited not enough depth.
- Add Characters section to the article.
Peer Feedback
[edit]- "Characters" can be added to make people kow more about the story.
- I think the "Accolades" should change into "Awards" and make the format same with other first topics.
- I also agree "Theme" should be added into the page and should be specific.
- It might be much better to add some subheadings to the plot summary. It will be helpful to understand the plot rather than a whole paragraph only.
ZangAnqi (talk) 04:40, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
Summary of Project
[edit]For this Wikipedia Project, I plan to go back through Toni Morrison's novel Beloved and comb through to find major overarching themes that are very relevant for this piece. This was an award winning novel that has been studied in schools and has been reviewed by o many critiques based on my research and having studied this literature in High school. There are far more themes that can be added into this section. Moreover, another aspect that needed to be added is the Characters section. It will help others know more about the novel and there should be a nice description of the characters and there major contributions to this novel as a whole. Instead of having one big chunk of text on this article under the "Plot" section, I plan to break it up and make the plot summary into this timeline of major events and how it relates to overarching themes. Lastly, once all of this is done I will add my own scholarly analysis, with the support of prior authors and sources, to this article. I plan to find some critiques and analysis done by other author's to support my insight followed by referencing them so others can find this information.
- These edits look good, Jnaeagbenla. I do have some concern about your plan to "add you own scholarly analysis," though. Remember that on Wikipedia no original scholarship is allowed. While you might collect more scholarship and summarize it on the page, you should refrain from adding anything that can't be referenced. The deduction here is because you haven't added these edit to the Article Talk page for Beloved (novel). (talk) 22:48, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
- I was not finished this is due at 11:59pm I didn't have a chance to finish but I knew I would add to the article talk page by 11:59 today as you put in the email Jnaeagbenla (talk) 00:37, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
- I've revised your grade to based on Talk page contributions on Beloved (novel). Nadinecross78 (talk) 21:18, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
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