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Plan For Improvement- Cowboy Hat

Howdy! My name is jmmonty16 and I am in Technical Editing Spring 2019 class. My goal is to edit to the best of my ability the quality of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cowboy_hat Cowboy Hat article. Here is my outline for the mission.

Change the Format

Introduction
History
Design

    – Variations

Style

    – 1800s 
    – 1900s
    – Modern Day

Size
Manufactures

    – Stores

Professional Use

Changes per Section- Cowboy Hat https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cowboy_hat#Footnotes

1. Introduction

condense the paragraphs
make it more detailed, it is way too broad
take out the fluff, or extra information that shouldn't be in introduction
No opinions
Fix the Gap that comes after the introduction before the section "Design"

La Croix edits

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmmonty16/sandbox

this is the link to my sandbox highlighting my edits from the La Croix page!