User talk:Jizila/sandbox

Week 2

I'm a big worried, Hyun: you only did half the assignment for this week. What happened? You wrote answers about the content gap in your sandbox, but you did not evaluate an article on Wikipedia like the instructions asked. What is more, your answers in your sandbox were a bit confusing. I think you misunderstood what a content gap is and how content gaps arise. I would encourage you to re-take the evaluating training module. A content gap, for instance, is not remedied by having shorter articles, as you state. That does not make sense. Please take more time to finish your assignments completely in the future. Alfgarciamora (talk) 20:28, 30 January 2017 (UTC)

Thank you Professor Garcia. I apologize, I completely forgot to evaluate an article like the instructions asked. Although I will not receive points on it, I will finish the task today and gain some experience, as well as research further on content gap. Jizila (talk) 21:35, 30 January 2017 (UTC) @Alfgarciamora:

@Jizila: Thank you for the prompt response, Hyun. I look forward to your future work. Make sure to pay attention to the details. The timeline page has a vast amount of details that will help ensure you do well in this project. Alfgarciamora (talk) 21:41, 30 January 2017 (UTC)

Week 5

@Jizila: Please make sure you always use the Wikipedia format when you write out your sources. Looking forward to seeing what you produce! Alfgarciamora (talk) 14:10, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

Week 6

Peer Edit Comments @Jizila: Hey Hyun! You have a good start so far, but I have a few questions. Are the changes that are going to be made to the article significant changes? I read over the draft you have, but I don't really see anything particularly eye catching. Is there any way you could expand just a little bit more on the Early Life section? You have a somewhat strong mission section and I don't think you would have change there. You also stated that you were going to add somethings about Toussaint and exilation? I'd love to see where you plan to go with that. Beyond those questions, I think that you are definitely on the right track and you are doing well. Good luck furthering your research and Happy Wiki-ing?!! DDenord (talk) 01:34, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

@DDenord: Thank you for your feedback! It's true I don't have much for my draft right now, but I definitely plan to add more. I do have more information on Sonthonax's early life that I plan to use, but I want to find more reliable sources for this information. I plan to also add more information about what happened to Sonthonax when he was in Saint Domingue this week. Jizila (talk) 02:24, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

@Jizila: Awesome! Just let me know if you need anything, hon! Happy Editing! DDenord (talk) 03:38, 6 March 2017 (UTC)

Week 8

You did an okay job for this week, Jizila, but I think that you can still add much more to your page. You still have a few weeks left to finish up researching and writing your page, so make sure you take advantage of these weeks to beef up your additions. Alfgarciamora (talk) 17:35, 20 March 2017 (UTC)