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Hello! I just wanted to mention that I feel like there is some information that you could shorten. Making it much more concise and clear to the reader. I didn't want to edit much of it but I just wanted to say that! Also maybe adding some links to your bibliography? Thank you! Xcheonsa (talk) 01:00, 22 March 2017 (UTC)