User talk:Jesse3mahr/sandbox
Hi Jesse3mahr, your article could use an Info Box (see right side of the article for San Francisco International Airport for an example). I think you could just copy and paste an existing info box for another airport and then populate the relevant data (and delete any fields that you didn't have info for). Admittedly, that seems like an awful lot of extra work, so I defer to your judgment on that one! I put in a very basic one however, which has accurate info in it, so if you don't hate it, you could use it just as is!
Overall, I think the article does a good job of laying out the critical information about the airport, along with good background info on notable events or features. It's dry material, certainly, but you've done great work keeping a tight focus.
The modifications I made, other than the info box, were mainly to insert internal Wiki links, as some items are traditional (City, State, etc), and some are sufficiently jargon-like (29.92, altimeter) to merit a place for readers to find additional info.
Final comment: I think the format for headers is Initial caps (first word capitalized, all other non-proper nouns s/b lower-case), but I'm not 100% sure, as I was too lazy to look it up.
In summary: great work, take my suggestions only as suggestions, nothing wrong here!
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