User talk:Jesperomys
Ways to improve The Fair Start Movement
[edit]Hello, Jesperomys,
Thank you for creating The Fair Start Movement.
I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:
The article describes why children's rights are important, and alludes to some of the ways their rights can be supported, but doesn't include any discussion of the group itself. It hence read more as an essay on children's rights, a topic that is covered elsewhere (Children's rights, for example).
The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Klbrain}}. Remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.
Delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.