User talk:Jenniwisniewski

Oh wow here's my user talk page for gis3614

I hope I'm doing this the right way?!?!?! User: Seunathm

I forgot to write an encouraging so I hope you do really well in this class and on the project! You can do it! Also is this your correct talk page? User: Seunathm — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seunathm (talk • contribs) 23:20, 28 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hope I'm doing this properly!! Have a great Thursday! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yahrlinm (talk • contribs) 13:49, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Very fascinating information on Agent 355. The placement of this edit (She is thought to have played a major role in exposing Arnold and the arrest of Andre.) seems to flow well with the rest of the paragraph and is well stated. The only thing that really throws off the paragraph is the unsourced statement at the end that has nothing to do with you, so it was overall a good choice for you. You made a good self-correction on your edit about Townsend and the supposed son- it is more clear about it being speculation with your fix. It was a good idea to add information about her death to the article, however, it doesn't all quite flow. The first sentence just says ship, but later you call it a prison ship. Which is it? More specifically, "She later died on the prison ship", isn't phrased in the speculative way that the rest of the information is presented; it is important to remain consistent especially with a topic that is shrouded in uncertainty. ButchDestroy (talk) 01:09, 10 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]