User talk:Jennbasa/sandbox
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[edit]Hi @Jennbasa:, I've gone through and fixed some issues with your work. However, I noticed that you have quite a few reference errors.
- Never cite Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a reliable source. Everything you've used that cites Wikipedia needs to go, or you need to find a reliable source to swap in for Wikipedia.
- Please bundle your refs. What I mean by this is, when you use the same reference to source multiple pieces of information, you can click "reuse" from the cite button. That way, a single ref isn't listed in the references section once per time it is used.
- looks like you have a lot of errors in the references (all the red text). For the date errors, I image that it's because the date isn't in the right format. Date should either be dmy (7 December 2018) or mdy (December 7, 2018).
--Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:29, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
- In light of the fact that all the minor formatting fixes I enacted to your sandbox were undone, a few more pieces of advice:
- Some of your section titles should be revised per MOS:SECTIONCAPS
- You should fix your levels per MOS:BODY
- "Headings follow a six-level hierarchy, starting at 1 and ending at 6. The level of the heading is defined by the number of equal signs on either side of the title. Heading 1 (=Heading 1=) is automatically generated as the title of the article, and is never appropriate within the body of articles. Sections start at the second level (==Heading 2==), with subsections at the third level (===Heading 3===), and additional levels of subsections at the fourth level (====Heading 4====), fifth level, and sixth level. Sections should be consecutive, such that they do not skip levels from sections to sub-subsections; the exact methodology is part of the Accessibility guideline.[5] Between sections, there should be a single blank line; multiple blank lines in the edit window create too much white space in the article. There is no need to include a blank line between a heading and sub-heading."
- Per MOS:LAYOUT external links go after references
- Titles of films are italicized per MOS:ITALICSTITLE