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Your submission at Articles for creation: Fiona Moriarty-McLaughlin (October 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ReaderofthePack was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This needs some work for tone, as it comes across as a little pro Moriarty-McLaughlin. You also need to be careful of the claims you make, as some of these can be considered original research. For example, you use a primary source to claim that Moriarty-McLaughlin is the original "woman on the street" because she interviewed students on campuses for a newscast. This is almost certainly not true, as she is very extremely unlikely to be the first woman who has gone to campuses or "on the street" to interview the average citizen. It's unlikely to be true even for YouTube. At most it may be true that she's the first to do such segments for Campus Reform, but you'd have to have sourcing to prove that - ie, sourcing that explicitly makes this statement.

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ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 04:44, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jenn0964453! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 04:44, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Happy editing! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 04:46, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fiona Moriarty-McLaughlin (November 18)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Curbon7 was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia.

Curbon7 (talk) 05:46, 18 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I readjusted this to a declination on the basis of WP:NBIO as a rejection was too hasty. Curbon7 (talk) 05:49, 18 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Fiona Moriarty-McLaughlin

Hello, Jenn0964453. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Fiona Moriarty-McLaughlin".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 05:18, 21 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]