User talk:Jenelove/sandbox

There are no inline citations in this article. Although you have sources listed below, you need to put the citations inline using the "cite tool" in the editing screen. You cannot not move into mainspace without proper citations. MMBiology (talk) 03:39, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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@Jenelove and Jkrumholz13: Nice work on your draft

References go after punctuation, not before.
References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. The first two sections don't meet this requirement, and the last sentence in each of them is unsourced.
Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Words like "kidney", "hypertension" and "autism spectrum disorder" should not be capitalized.
You need to copyedit the article carefully - there are a lot of typos that need to be fixed.
The Blockers section has non-existent references (just numbers that don't refer to anything real).
Your references are incomplete. Please use the "Cite" tool on the Visual Editor to general complete references.
Your "Further reading" (formerly "Additional references") section is too long. You need to pare it down to a few carefully-selected references.
There's a lot of important information on the existing N-type calcium channel article including {{infobox_gene}}, several footers and categories. As you update that article, make sure that existing information is preserved. If you're replacing sources, are you replacing them with better sources? Is any important information of links being lost? Remember that you aren't replacing the article wholesale, you're integrating your additions into an existing article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:13, 6 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]