User talk:Jeh/Archives/2015/02

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Laserdisc WIP

Hi Jeh! - I noticed by chance you'd started a WIP re-write on the Laserdisc page. Sorely needed IMHO. I started one a long time ago here: User:Megapixie/Laserdisc. Frankly I'm too busy in meat-space to get it over the line. I would be delighted if you incorporated the material therein in any re-write. All the best. Megapixie (talk) 12:43, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

I started mostly because I noticed a profusion of sentences beginning with "However,...". Many of them didn't even express alternation from the preceding sentence! But the section I have in my WIP needed more attention. I'll take a look at your page and see what I can do... Thanks! Jeh (talk) 19:43, 11 February 2015 (UTC)