User talk:JeeringElk1/Jean Tarde Sandbox

Hello JeeringElk and rest of the group,

Looking at your page for peer reviewing and it looks like you have a good topic with enough information to cover. In looking at the content of your work I think there are many more references/citations you can add. I also noticed you are not always writing in a neutral tone, I would go back and proof read to make sure you are not posing any swaying conversation about these historical figures or proposing thoughts for them. I think the information you include is relevant, however it could be structured more formally and excluding the bullet points may help with the general flow of reading and organization of the page. Also I noticed you had many references yet not so many sources listed in your bibliography, are the references just sources you link to the page (words in blue) and the bibliography are sources you use from your research?

Wikiprodigi (talk) 03:45, 20 November 2018 (UTC)wikiprodigi